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make_your_move ([personal profile] make_your_move) wrote2006-03-29 11:19 am
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Haiku

Sitting in the sun
Strawberries drip down my chin
Life is good right now

[identity profile] bkleber.livejournal.com 2006-03-29 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Not to be picky, but... um... how do *you* pronounce "strawberries"? *impish grin* The way I read it, that second line has 8 syllables, not the requisite 7.

[identity profile] make-your-move.livejournal.com 2006-03-29 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oops - miscount ... corrected now .. ya' picky bastard ;) ~mwah~

[identity profile] bkleber.livejournal.com 2006-03-29 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm.. nice :-) Indeed a lovely image. And you like me being a picky bastard. Gives you an excuse to get back at me in other ways ;-)

I actually didn't know if it was a mistake, though--I had a teacher in grade school form the deep south, and she pronounced "orange" with only one syllable. It was freaky.