Not to be picky, but... um... how do *you* pronounce "strawberries"? *impish grin* The way I read it, that second line has 8 syllables, not the requisite 7.
Mmm.. nice :-) Indeed a lovely image. And you like me being a picky bastard. Gives you an excuse to get back at me in other ways ;-)
I actually didn't know if it was a mistake, though--I had a teacher in grade school form the deep south, and she pronounced "orange" with only one syllable. It was freaky.
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Date: 2006-03-29 04:32 pm (UTC)I actually didn't know if it was a mistake, though--I had a teacher in grade school form the deep south, and she pronounced "orange" with only one syllable. It was freaky.
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