Haiku

Mar. 29th, 2006 11:19 am
make_your_move: (mym corset front view)
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Sitting in the sun
Strawberries drip down my chin
Life is good right now

Date: 2006-03-29 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-nita.livejournal.com
Mmm..sounds it, babe.

Date: 2006-03-29 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sambear.livejournal.com
Mmm. Good poem.

Date: 2006-03-29 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bkleber.livejournal.com
Not to be picky, but... um... how do *you* pronounce "strawberries"? *impish grin* The way I read it, that second line has 8 syllables, not the requisite 7.

Date: 2006-03-29 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] make-your-move.livejournal.com
Oops - miscount ... corrected now .. ya' picky bastard ;) ~mwah~

Date: 2006-03-29 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bkleber.livejournal.com
Mmm.. nice :-) Indeed a lovely image. And you like me being a picky bastard. Gives you an excuse to get back at me in other ways ;-)

I actually didn't know if it was a mistake, though--I had a teacher in grade school form the deep south, and she pronounced "orange" with only one syllable. It was freaky.

Date: 2006-03-29 04:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] kellfire.livejournal.com
Nice mental-visual imagery....

Date: 2006-03-29 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msruth.livejournal.com
Hmm...what a picture I get from this. Very sweet.

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